Sunday 8 March 2015

Rough Cut 2 (Improvements Needed)


Things We Need To Improve 

- The ending of the opening sequence needs to leave the viewer feeling like they want to watch the rest of the movie which at the moment does not portray in what direction the movie is actually going. 
- During the walking scene it didn't distinguish the stereotype we were looking to have using the lonely boy
- Forcing us to add another scene to the end of the movie to help create the stereotype that in the end began to give the viewer an understanding of what direction the movie is going in.

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